Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.

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In recent days, several individuals have diverse opinions about whether they decide on too many issues because they have lots of chance to choose it. Daily life habits compared to the past, have many unusual topics.

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, thanks to developing technology, society can see everywhere and they have increased their options. I agree with

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statement which will be enlightened in

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essay. The primary reason for

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, human beings’ rituals have changed

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. People have chosen the option of which animal they hunted or which plant they collect at the beginning of the world.

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, today's population wake up morning and start to prefer, which clothes they wear, and what eat for breakfast. If they go to work, they will think about all topics, they can go via bus or car or shuttle. Employing area is

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changed, they prefer many jobs. Maybe 15 years ago, influencers did not make sense to anybody but adolescents can choose

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job for their entire life.

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, technological development rises alternatives. community walked everywhere before someone designed a car or aeroplane. They just went to a limited area because they had no vehicle to go long distances.

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they can go across the ocean

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aeroplane, and they can see foreign nation’s growth so they added new selections to their life. Humans just knew their family’s information before they travel to other countries but now they can easily access every data with one finger movement through the internet. All of reason they have to select a million topics so as to find their way. Especially in recent days lots of humans think that they have to deal with so many decisions. They right

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opinion,

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both technological and society’s routine change, the public has too many options

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and they have to make a decision one of them inasmuch as they live their activity.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

323 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

overwhelmed
decision fatigue
paralysis by analysis
consumerism
globalization
personal autonomy
market saturation
option overload
decision-making process
psychological well-being
buyer's remorse
customization
trade-offs
minimalism
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