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Some students take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. Discus the advantages and disadvantages.

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In recent years,
due to
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 the trend of working holidays, more and more
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 decide to take a
gap
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year
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 after graduating high school to travel abroad, work, or become an intern.
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, some people regard a
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year
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 as an irresponsible excuse of escaping from studying in college. In my opinion, it is totally upside down. Because
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 experience can help teenagers to broaden their horizons, figure out what they are interested in ,and establish their confidence. There are some discussions about the drawbacks of taking a
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year
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. The most common one is that taking a
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year
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 will make
students
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 unwilling to go back to school again. In fact,
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 situation may happen,
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 after finishing their
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 years most
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 tend to study harder than those who attend directly to universities. The reason is that they will become more mature and they know the importance of getting a better academic score, which will help them to find a better job.
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, the pros that I mentioned above, there are three positive effects of having a
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year
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First,
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no matter studying abroad or working will help
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 obtain social experiences.
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, If you go to other countries to study, you will need to deal with your accommodation, flight tickets ,and daily meal on your own. And if you go to work, you will learn how to cope with the relationships with your managers and co-workers.
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a
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year
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 experience can let teenagers find out what they want to major in their college.
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 will help them have
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 possibilities to regret in the future.
Third,
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it is common for
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 to acquire some skills in their
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year
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.
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,
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 will boost their confidence. In conclusion,
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 some public believed that a
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year
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 is an expensive and ineffective activity, personally, I think that it can give a lot of advantages to the
students
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.
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