You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear John, Hopefully, you guys are in great spirits! My apologies for not being in touch with you all, but I am making up for it via
this
letter, at least I hope so! It is great news that
finally
, you are thinking about driving. A driving license is not only a way to drive but it
also
gives driving skills which is essential in today's era. If you remember, when I came to Canada 3 years back, I was struggling a lot with public transport and in frustration, I used to say that I should buy a car as soon as possible. Believe me,
last
year I got my license and since that, my travelling life has been more peaceful. Nowadays, in Toronto City, you can find a driving school at each intersection but here I would highly recommend
you
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City Driving Academy which is on Yonge Street near Eglinton Station. My other friends and I had a top-notch experience with them, so join their school. Remember, It is a lifelong skill which will support your everyday life, so do not take classes in a rush. When you find that confidence
then
book your License exam
otherwise
do extra practice. I hope all the above suggestions will make your decision easy. Love, Garima
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph clearly aligns with its intended message for improved clarity and logical flow.
task achievement
Consider expanding your suggestions and guidance with more detailed examples or personal anecdotes for even greater task achievement.
task achievement
You effectively used a friendly and appropriate tone throughout the letter, which suits the task's requirements.
coherence cohesion
Your paragraphs each focused well on a specific topic, which helped in making your letter coherent and organized.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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