The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table and pie chart illustrates the
amount
of police money
in a specific area, Britain for 2017 and 2018. The table provides information about the sources of fund
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funds
while
the chart shows how the budget
was spent.
Overall
, the amount
of money
which came from various sources decreased constantly in both two years and the overall
amount
is nearly the same. The fund was spent on salaries which is
given to officers and staff is higher rather than other fields.
The highest Change the verb form
are
amount
of budget
is
came from Unnecessary verb
apply
national
government, amounting Add an article
the national
for
£175.5 Change preposition
to
million
and £177.8 million
respectively. Thus
it can be say
that Change the verb form
be said
national
government plays an important role in one area of Correct article usage
the national
United
Kingdom. In terms of local taxes, the Correct article usage
the United
amount
in 2017 rose slightly to reach £102.3 million
in 2018. The fund from other sources in both 2017 and 2018 holds the
Correct article usage
a
smilier
Correct your spelling
smaller
amount
of police
Correct article usage
the police
budget
, accounting for £38 million
and £38.5 million
in turn.
With regarding
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regard
to
the geographical Remove the preposition
apply
spilts
of spending Correct your spelling
splits
split
money
, the majority of budget
went to the salaries of officers and staff which stand in Add an article
the budget
the
first place, at a massive 75% and 69% respectively. The much Correct article usage
apply
money
is used in
technology at a mere 14% in 2018 rather than in 2017. Change preposition
on
Building
and transport Correct article usage
The building
budget
did not show any changes in both two years.Submitted by hninayewuttyi.h on
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