Some people believe that humans should be able to use animals for their own benefit, while others argue that the rights of animals should be protected. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, more and more people buy
pets
as a way of
amusment
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amusement
.
Thus
, there is a discussion about the human treatment
on
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them. Plenty of people believe that humans can possess their
animals
as an asset,
while
others think
animals
should have their own
rights
respected.
Although
pets
can have several
rights
, I believe that their owners should treat them as possession.
To begin
with, actually,
pets
have their own
rights
which should be
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concerned
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.
First,
they should not be negatively affected by strangers. Like material assets,
pets
are the property of their owners and they should not be triggered, attacked or robbed by those who do not have authority
on
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them.
This
situation is like robbing a
luxirious
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luxurious
bag from a woman or breaking the glass of
a
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automobile is illegal.
Moreover
,
animals
have the right to be cured by veterinarians. Like a broken television brought to a repairman
,
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when injured or sick, dogs or cats can be treated by animal doctors.
Nevertheless
, the
rights
of
pets
are not enough to neglect the authority of humans
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them. First of all,
besides
the two aforementioned
rights
,
animals
possibly have no others. Up to now, there have been no transparent definitions
about
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their
rights
.
Therefore
, treating
pets
as
a
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property is more likely not illegal or at least offensive.
In addition
, at present,
animals
, including
pets
, are the products of an enormous industry. In
this
economic sector, they are fed and allowed to breed to supply various demands of humans,
such
as guarding
house
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, catching mice, filling the feeling of solitude and playing with children when adults are not at home.
Thus
, to all extent,
animals
are a kind
goods
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that people can exchange in
market
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.
To conclude
, in spite of some apparent
rights
such
as being secured and medically cured,
animals
should be treated as the asset of their owners.
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