The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009

The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009
The charts below illustrate the production of electricity from all resources and renewables in Germany and France in 2009.
Overall
, as we can see, Germany had the highest production which was chiefly from conventional thermal,
while
the main source of France's production was nuclear energy. In Germany, renewables made up about 17% of total resources
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the electricity generated by biomass and wind, in sequence, comprising approximately 39% and 37%.
Moreover
, hydroelectric constitutes the largest portion of the left which was around 17%.
Finally
, geothermal had no contribution to generating power. In France;
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the second highest proportion with close to 14% after the nuclear source with the greatest portion which was over three fourth of the pie chart.
Furthermore
, among renewables hydroelectric made up about four fifth,
then
power supplied by wind and biomass which were 10% and 8% respectively. The
last
two sources were solar and geothermal with almost less than 1%.
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