The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
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The pie graphs and table below compare the total value and sources of fish from 1988 to 2000 introduced in the United States.
Overall
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, the three pie charts, the first for the year 1988, another in 1992 and the
last
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one in 2000, show us that the sources imported to the US come from three countries: Canada, another pic from China and
then
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, the remaining countries. As we can see, the percentage of importation to the US varies from one year to another. Indeed, at first in 1988, a huge majority of fish was exported from Canada up to 60%.
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, in 2000 only 28% .
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, in 1992 and 2000, there is not a single dominant country exporting it.
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, in 2000, sources of fish coming from other countries played an important role as an exporter for the Americans.
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, the total value of billions of dollars has increased over time. At
first,
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it made 6.57 billion dollars and in 2000 up to 10.72 which is almost double.
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