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The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
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The chart below shows the quantity of
fish
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 imported by some
countries
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 to the US between 1988 and 2000 and their sources.
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 the rate of importation has
raised
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risen
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 during the period.
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,
fish
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 that were imported more often from Canada are now from China and other
countries
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.
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, in 1988 the total charge of importation was 6,57 billion dollars, in 2000 the numbers represented 10,72 billion dollars, almost double. In fact, there has been a big increase in the total value over the years. In 1992 the amount was 8,52 billion. Looking at the information in detail, we can see that Canada was the main country from where
fish
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 were taken in 1988 with 60% of the total.
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, that varies through the years. In fact, in 1992 the change was already significant with only 34% for the North American
countries
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. In 2000, many other
countries
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 exported more
fish
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 to the US than Canada. They exported 42% of the product, and especially China itself 30%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, countries with synonyms.
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