Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

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"Dear Sa, I hope you and your family are doing well. I have just received your letter
which
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you asked me for interesting news about my country-Viet Nam. Now I am glad to share with you
news
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that is
very
pupular
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popular
nowadays.
This
news is about the covid 19 outbreak which is
extremely
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serious problem in the world, a large number of people have died from
this
virus. The epidemic occurred
at the end
of 2019, there
was
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three outbreaks in my country with a total of 2800 infections. These cases were detected early and treated so the number of deaths was very low.
However
after 2 months without new any infections, at
the
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present
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the number of new cases
are
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is
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increasing
drammaticaly
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dramatically
when Vietnameses finished
traditional
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holiday.
This
is very dangerous, and the government quickly implemented the epidemic prevention
campain
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campaign
such
as some areas
are
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being
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blocked down and
quarantine
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quarantining
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patients and related cases. Especially all of Viet Nam do slogan “
if
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unnecessary, stay at home”. I hope that the vaccine will be enough for all
of
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people
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the people
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and the world will invent
the
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method to kill
this
virus and
preventing
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prevent
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them to develop. Thanks
to
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for
your
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caring about my country. Hoping you and your family take care of
health
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your health
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. Yours sincerely, Anne."
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • headline
  • current affairs
  • devastating
  • impactful
  • recovery efforts
  • resilience
  • affected
  • damage
  • hometown
  • relate
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