Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

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"Dear Sa, I hope you and your family are doing well. I have just received your letter

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you asked me for interesting news about my country-Viet Nam. Now I am glad to share with you

news

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the news

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that is

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very

pupular

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popular

nowadays.

This

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news is about the covid 19 outbreak which is

extremely

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serious problem in the world, a large number of people have died from

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virus. The epidemic occurred

at the end

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of 2019, there

was

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three outbreaks in my country with a total of 2800 infections. These cases were detected early and treated so the number of deaths was very low.

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after 2 months without new any infections, at

the

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present

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the number of new cases

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increasing

drammaticaly

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dramatically

when Vietnameses finished

traditional

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holiday.

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is very dangerous, and the government quickly implemented the epidemic prevention

campain

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campaign

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as some areas

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blocked down and

quarantine

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quarantining

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patients and related cases. Especially all of Viet Nam do slogan “

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unnecessary, stay at home”. I hope that the vaccine will be enough for all

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apply

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people

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the people

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and the world will invent

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method to kill

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virus and

preventing

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prevent

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them to develop. Thanks

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apply

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for

your

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caring about my country. Hoping you and your family take care of

health

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your health

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. Yours sincerely, Anne."

buithuongktThu Jun 08 2023

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

215 words

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