Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What measures can government and individuals take tackle this issue ?

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of our society know about the influence
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government can provide more
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in the country.
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enormous amount of carbon which we throw out in nature when we ride
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can clean the air which we consume every second.
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volunteers
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global warming.
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or more years. In conclusion, global warming is a big
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which we should solve as quickly as possible.
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vehicles and lessons about
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warming. I believe, that everyone should be concerned about the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • burning of fossil fuels
  • greenhouse gases
  • trap heat
  • atmosphere
  • deforestation
  • carbon dioxide
  • greenhouse effect
  • industrial activities
  • agricultural practices
  • carbon emissions
  • renewable energy
  • environmental regulations
  • energy efficiency
  • carbon footprint
  • lifestyle changes
  • public transportation
  • recycling
  • conserving energy
  • LED bulbs
  • plant-based diet
  • raising awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • international cooperation
  • Paris Agreement
  • mitigate
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