The internet has become profoundly efficient and popular that people choose it as a platform to learn. Some believe that it would eventually replace the need for books. Do you agree or disagree?

In the present world, development of the technology is increased drastically. Including, the establishment

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in the learning system

such

as

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internet

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. People can browse and communicate

with

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internet

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. It is agreed that someday, the

needs

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of

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book

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will be replaced by

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. Analyzing the efficiency of

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,

as well as

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government

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to

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keeping the

tress

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instead

of logging

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for

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makes a

paper

.

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,

internet

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is a common

things

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in

the

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society nowadays. They have a smartphone, computer, laptop, and even television to browse any information

used

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internet

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. It

is

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depicts that

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a

browser

is efficient and simple.

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, citizens can

got

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all information within one

minutes

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by their smartphone. They even bring their handphone in

the

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pocket.

However

,

book

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needs a space or bag to bring it up and sometimes, timing is necessary when someone looking for data in the

book

by searching page by page.

That is

why

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internet

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is more popular than

paper

.

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global warming day by day. One of the

reason

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is

trees

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logging has been

happened

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in the most of

forest

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in

all

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country. Felling trees

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needed to produce

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paper

. Because of that, some

place

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start

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implemented

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a go green program with reduces

a

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using

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of

paper

.

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, nowadays, shop

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used

an

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email to send their invoice

instead

of printing

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. It is

clearly

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that someday

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a book

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book

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or any

paper

will

disappeared

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. To summarise, the using of

internet

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is profoundly effective to search

a information

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information

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and keep the world

save

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. It is pretty agreed​ that

browser

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browsers

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replaced the need

of

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books or papers. After

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thoroughly

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analysis

in

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this

subject, the adverb effect of lost

papet

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paper

is always greater than the negative effects.