Children have too much freedoms nowadays. Do you agree or disagree ? Why ?

In
this
cutting-edge era, a number of
parents
do not care for their children as they give them more right for performing any
work
. I totally agree with
this
notion.
this
essay will discuss reasons for having more opportunities for children which will be elaborated on in the subsequent paragraphs. To embark with, there are some reasons why heir has more power these days. The predominant one is that in
this
modern epoch,
due to
the advancement of ,technology offspring can do any
according to
their interests with the help of various electronic gadgets
such
as computers, laptops, smartphones and many more. They are dependent only on these gadgets so they have no need for their
parents
for doing any
work
.
While
sitting at their home they can talk to anyone and on social sites they can make
friends
with anyone from all over the world.
This
may lead to more privilege for them.
Moreover
, everyone knows that these days every parent becomes a workaholic ,so they have less time to spend and explore any place with their scion. Whenever their heir wants to go anywhere at that time they always allow visiting anywhere. Owing to their
parents
they have more flexibility. Nowadays, most little ones like to visit with their
friends
. Some of their
friends
are good but some are not so whenever go with their
friends
if those
friends
are not good for them
then
they could influence by them and they
also
do bad
work
as those
friends
do in their life
that is
why
this
is not good for scion to have more exemption in their life . If they have good
friends
then
it would be good for Scion,
therefore
,
parents
should take care of their little ones. In conclusion, having more ability for offspring
due to
technology and
parents
'
work
is not worthwhile for children's careers.
Submitted by MANJOT on

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