Children have too much freedoms nowadays. Do you agree or disagree ? Why ?
In
this
cutting-edge era, a number of parents
do not care for their children as they give them more right for performing any work
. I totally agree with this
notion. this
essay will discuss reasons for having more opportunities for children which will be elaborated on in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, there are some reasons why heir has more power these days. The predominant one is that in this
modern epoch, due to
the advancement of ,technology offspring can do any according to
their interests with the help of various electronic gadgets such
as computers, laptops, smartphones and many more. They are dependent only on these gadgets so they have no need for their parents
for doing any work
. While
sitting at their home they can talk to anyone and on social sites they can make friends
with anyone from all over the world. This
may lead to more privilege for them.
Moreover
, everyone knows that these days every parent becomes a workaholic ,so they have less time to spend and explore any place with their scion. Whenever their heir wants to go anywhere at that time they always allow visiting anywhere. Owing to their parents
they have more flexibility. Nowadays, most little ones like to visit with their friends
. Some of their friends
are good but some are not so whenever go with their friends
if those friends
are not good for them then
they could influence by them and they also
do bad work
as those friends
do in their life that is
why this
is not good for scion to have more exemption in their life . If they have good friends
then
it would be good for Scion,therefore
, parents
should take care of their little ones.
In conclusion, having more ability for offspring due to
technology and parents
' work
is not worthwhile for children's careers.Submitted by MANJOT on
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