The academic dishonesty* of students is becoming a serious problem at school In your essay, provide at least two reasons why students cheat at school, and discuss at least two negative effects academic dishonesty may have.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Recently, our generation

are

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

did not pay

Correct word choice

show examples

much attention

Change preposition

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

education as

did

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

our

oler

Correct your spelling

older

relatives.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, our

lazyness

Correct your spelling

laziness

lead us to the searching

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

ways

Correct the article-noun agreement

way

show examples

how to cheat

Change preposition

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

test or exams. And

as a result

Linking Words

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

academic

dishonest

Replace the word

dishonesty

show examples

became a

seriour

Correct your spelling

serious

increased problem. There

Change the verb form

are

show examples

two reasons why pupils cheat at school and

also

Linking Words

the negative effect

from

Change preposition

show examples

this

Linking Words

Firstly

Linking Words

, now we live in the social media and smartphones century and through the years

that is

Linking Words

became the one thing which we are concerned about.

Moreover

Linking Words

medias

Correct your spelling

media

show examples

became a part of our

live

Replace the word

lives

show examples

, from which we are getting abused every single day.

This

Linking Words

usage of

medias

Correct your spelling

media

show examples

have

Change the verb form

has

show examples

a negative influence on our education

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

because they

are take

Change the verb form

are taking

show examples

a lot of our time and energy

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

because we consume

many

Replace the quantifier

much

show examples

unnecessary information. After that, we

are

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

became lazy and did not pay as much attention to preparation for school.

As a result

Linking Words

, the one way we see, it is to write off our

works

Fix the agreement mistake

work

show examples

, but we can be cached on

this

Linking Words

and

that

Linking Words

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

can

became

Change the verb form

become

show examples

a big problem for us and our parents

Secondly

Linking Words

, if we try to look more widely, there is another problem related to the many hobbies. Everyone says that

child

Correct article usage

a child

show examples

should have as

much

Correct quantifier usage

many

show examples

possibe

Correct your spelling

possible

afterschool activities, because it

develope

Correct your spelling

develops

developed

develop

concentration, time management and our body.

However

Linking Words

this

Change the determiner

these

show examples

activities take so much effort and energy, that the person did not have enough

strengh

Correct your spelling

strength

Change preposition

for

show examples

the

home work

Correct your spelling

homework

show examples

and preparation. As

Change the article

show examples

effect, they did not fully prepare for the

works

Fix the agreement mistake

work

show examples

and writing off in your class

were

Correct your spelling

where

show examples

you are sitting

everyday

Replace the word

every day

show examples

in your comfort zone can help you, but when you come to your final exams you would understand that there you will be responsible for your work and

as a consequence

Linking Words

you can fail your exam. In conclusion, abuse by social media and paying a lot of time which we spend on hobbies lead us

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the cheating.

Othervice

Correct your spelling

Otherwise

Other vice

this

Linking Words

dishones

Correct your spelling

dishonest

dishonesty

method of writing our test lead us to the problems with teachers and fail on the exams.

evaivodiss2005Thu Jun 08 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

for example
for instance
to illustrate this
to give a clear example
such as
namely
to illustrate
take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
43
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

348 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
Topic: Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Homeworks help to improve the knowledge of students.Few folks think that teachers should not give any activities for the children to do from home.Moreover,others argue that homework has a significant role in the schooling of pupils.I partially agree with this notion.This essay will articulate these views in detail along with a relevant conclusion.
7
band
The differences between countries are becoming less and less evident, as people all over the world wear the same fashions, use the same brands, have similar eating habits and watch the same TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?
In the contemporary world, everyone struggles to spend a lavish lifestyle, and therefore, the standard of living worldwide has reached a plateau. Albeit the trend of spending an equivalent lifestyle possesses a set of merits and demerits, I firmly assert that the positives of such a trend overpowers the negatives.
7.5
band
Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that nowadays most important nature-related issues are the extinction of trees and species,whereas others argue that global warming,climate change,and air pollution are the main problems for the environment.In my opinion,I think that we should not focus on any particular problem rather we should concentrate on every problem because it is related to the environment.
7
band
Nowadays a large number of wild animals are under the threat of extinction. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
These days, we can see that the huge figure of creatures other than humans has reduced; moreover, a species of them died out. This essay discusses the main happening that creates this situation and how we can solve this matter.
7
band
Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, using hands to do all housework in the home is replaced by advanced technology. I believe that the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks.

The academic dishonesty* of students is becoming a serious problem at school In your essay, provide at least two reasons why students cheat at school, and discuss at least two negative effects academic dishonesty may have.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Topic: Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

The differences between countries are becoming less and less evident, as people all over the world wear the same fashions, use the same brands, have similar eating habits and watch the same TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays a large number of wild animals are under the threat of extinction. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.