You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

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Dear Dad, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits.I have the best news to tell you.Well,I have my convocation scheduled for next month. Well,I'm glad to tell you that I have completed my Bachelor's degree and I will be graduating next month .I'd love to have my family by my side on

this

special day.

This

ceremony is scheduled for June 17,2023 .It'll start at 10:30 AM in the main Auditorium of the university.I wish you, Mom and Sarah will come there to be with me.

Also

, don't worry about the dress code because you can wear formal clothes or casual as well.There is no particular rule about it. Anyways, I have 5 tickets with me .One is for me and the rest of them are for family members or love-ones.So ,I am thinking of inviting Jack as well because he is my best friend since kindergarten.I would be very happy if he will be there

along with

my parents and sister.I will be waiting for all of you and excited to spend time with you. Warm wishes, Ann

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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6 paragraphs

183 words

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