Some individuals believe that the great method to achieve
success
in professional and personal life is to complete
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tertiary
education
, and others think
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otherwise
. In my opinion, studying higher
education
is
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gate to accomplish
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in life.
On the other hand
, there are many reasons why some members of society hold
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that engaging in
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market after
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high school
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to
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success
.
Firstly
, people who decide to
work
immediately after high school can gain real experience rather
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, which helps them to become successful.
This
is because, people who have real experience are more likely to
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,
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salaries.
Secondly
, there are several famous
who become successful without
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degree
.
For example
, Steve Jobs founded the most successful company Apple,
although
he
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not have
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education
.
On the other hand
, I agree with those who believe
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degree
is
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success
. To
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with, it is impossible to become
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, lawyer,
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without higher
. To put
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other words,
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this
occupations usually are more likely to
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development
,
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wages, which means they can become
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.
Secondly
,
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most
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successful scientists who
work
in research centers hold university
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.
For instance
, researchers who
work
in order
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find new drugs for diseases or
work
to fight climate change and global warming.
This
indicateChange the verb form
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to importance of tertiary
education
.
To sum up
, in my perspective,
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degree
is
betterAdd an article
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way to accomplish,
this
because people who have higher
are more likely to have
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career and provide valuable services to society
such
fight complex issues, diseases, climate change as well global warming.