Countries should produce the food that their population eats, and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons, examples to your answer.

Agricultur
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Agriculture
is an industry that
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not only provide food for people, but
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apply
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also
helps to build a stronger
econmy
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economy
. In
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essay, I will discuss why I agree with
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thought. When a government provide local food for the people, an economical
prosperty
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prosperity
property
may happen.
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can happen because the hard currency, United States dollars,
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kept inside that country in
this
way the Central bank will not be depleted of
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resources by
forigen
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foreign
transactions.
also
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this
will provide
big
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a big
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number of employment for locals to help them support themselves and pay taxes which in return will pay back to the government, and
eventulay
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eventually
this
money will end up being used to build schools and hospitals.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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