Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for this? Is this a negative or Positive development.

Recently, many

children

have been

suffer

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a considerable amount of stress in achievement because of their

parent

's enforcement. The

parent

's attitude

developes

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develops

developers

developed

due to

many

reason

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and the

continuoation

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continuation

of

this

trend will bring negative consequences. First of all, one of the main factors is the utter care from

parent

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parents

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. They always hope

the

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for the

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best things for their

children

such

as

:

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a stable job with

high

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a high

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salary, a big house,

car

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a car

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...

Therefore

, they make their

children

to

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study more,

achieve

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and achieve

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more in life which potentially

form

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the

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pressure

inside

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on

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the kids.

Moreover

, some folks are so competitive that they force their

children

to be more

success

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successful

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,

more

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and more

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intelligent for them to show off

with

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to

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everyone. In my point of view,

this

development is completely negative which will badly impact

on

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children

's life.

For example

, if the child has to put up with a lot of

strees

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stress

and pressure, they will be mentally ill. They will against their

parent

's desire and do what they think is right for them. In

addtition

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addition

to that, if the result doesn't live up to their expectation, the

children

will become

depression

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.

For instance

,

according to

data, there are 20%

children

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of children

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in the world suicide because they think they are

loser

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losers

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and make their

parent

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parents

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disappointed.As we can see, has it not been for the emotionless of the

parent

, the

children

's future would have been

change

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. In conclusion, though enforcement of parents might help to gain success of

children

, I believe that

this

could be psychologically disadvantageous for them. Their future

is depend

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depends

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on

family's

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the family's

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education. So for

children

today, for future

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tomorrow

tomorow

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tomorrow