Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving companies, factories and their employment to the countryside . Do you agree or disagree?

There has been a growing concern over huge influx and accommodation issues in urban

areas

, in recent years.

Although

, some people may think the best way to solve it would be to move both workers and companies to rural

areas

. I disagree with

this

notion and have the opinion that there are other better methods of dealing with

such

issue

Fix the agreement mistake

issues

show examples

. There are many drawbacks to moving factories and employees to the countryside.

Firstly

, most rural

areas

might not have many facilities which are found in cities , and as a ,result it might not be attractive to the majority of workers . Those industries that might choose to operate in the countryside may not be able to lure competent working people because of the location where the factory .

In addition

, those firms may have gone too far from their source of raw materials which in turn may increase their running costs .

Although

this

option of going to less populated

areas

seems to be a better way of solving transportation and housing problems in

big

Add an article

a big

the big

show examples

metropolis ,

this

decision will

also

come with its costs.

However

, there are other ways of mitigating traffic and housing problems .

For instance

, the government should improve the public transport system so that it will be more efficient

that

Correct word choice

so that

show examples

nation will choose to use them

instead

of driving their private cars, which might reduce traffic significantly.

This

method was implemented by the city of Pretoria in South Africa and it worked very well. To solve the issue of accommodation in larger cities , the authorities should move certain industries and facilities to small towns and decongest major

municipality

Fix the agreement mistake

municipalities

show examples

since the main reason why people flock to

capital

Correct article usage

the capital

show examples

is to look for employment. If citizens can able to survive in their

home towns

Correct your spelling

hometowns

show examples

, there will be no need to find work in the megapolis. In conclusion, moving companies and their employees to rural

areas

will definitely solve the transport and housing issues, but there are

also

other methods to rectify

these dilemma

Change the determiner

this dilemma

these dilemmas

show examples

.