Some countries encourage foreign companies to open in their country. Many people think the government should focus on encouranging local business rather than foreign businesses. To what extent do you agree?

Certain individuals claim that countries should motivate other nations to introduce foreign companies

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of promoting their own local trade.

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approach will bring numerous benefits, I strongly agree with the latter

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certain reasons that I Will elaborate

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consideration that why it is pivotal to encourage the local brands, and the prominent one is to create job opportunities for the residents.

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is because local people can engage themselves in

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something they are already connected to from the time they are born,

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the unemployment status can be improved . To illustrate, Indian culture can only be promoted by the person who knows Indian traditions and values. Another key consideration

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local businesses

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the economy of

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, as they are investing huge money to pay

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taxes.

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, the funds paid by taxpayers are

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for the citizens and other infrastructure.

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, by introducing local companies we can protect the local culture and distinction from other countries,

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local culture and traditions can become an excellent source of revenue. To illustrate, tourists visiting India are contributing towards the economy of India by paying

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tickets during their travel. In conclusion, I completely agree with the phenomenon that

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domestic trade as

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propel economic activity

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and prevent disparities in future.