in some countries , a few people earn extremely high salaries . some people think that it is good for the country, while others believe that government should limit their slaries and limit the amount people can earn . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe the government should supervise the limitation of wages,

while

others think it is beneficial for the nation if only

specific

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hierarchy can earn radically high

salaries

. I agree with the view that people should get considerably good pay

due to

below reasons: Admittedly, if the authority monitors the upper

limitt

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limit

of wages can prevent financial fraud and eliminate the gap between rich and poor.

Firstly

, some company's

trustee

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recieve

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receive

millions of dividends even when the revenue is in debt, but

by

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controlling their

salaries

ceiling can significantly prevent these

scandles

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scandals

candles

.

Secondly

, the inequality gap between rich and poor will decrease, and society will have less

conflictions

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.

However

, of parament high earnings is the motion of progress, people will keep

advance

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themselves in order to get paid high

salaries

.

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,

semiconductor

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industry is the most popular profession among students, they will study really hard to enter

best

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university so that they might have more

chance

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to enter

the

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company

such

as TSMC after graduation.

Moreover

, the staffs

work

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at

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this

industry will perform

excellent

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and surpass other competitors so they can be evaluated as high quality and may get

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enomorus

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enormous

bonus

at the end

of the year.

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hard

working

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makes the

company

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competitiveness strong and

enhance

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the reputation of

country

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. In conclusion, restricting

the

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salaries

can address many problems, but

i

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believe high pay

contribute

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to

significantly

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advancement.

Thus

,

let

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the market decides the ceiling of

the

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wages is the best solution.