With the increased global demands in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

The Middle East's natural resources
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been the main source of energy export to the world.
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, oil and gas
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not limited to a specific geographical location, and with evidence that
such
resources may be traced in the Mediterranean sea bed, it is now time to expand the globe's supply to meet the ever-increasing need in the industry. I strongly agree with the aforementioned statement because
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discoveries will not only
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the demand but
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increase the
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prospects of the country
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new area is found in.
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