It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
It is vital for
parents
to teach their sons or daughters about Use synonyms
right
and wrong things at a very young age. Sometimes Use synonyms
punishment
is essential for Use synonyms
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learning. Linking Words
Therefore
, in Linking Words
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essay, I will discuss why Linking Words
punishment
is important in teaching Use synonyms
children
about Use synonyms
right
or wrong and what kind of Use synonyms
punishment
can be used by Use synonyms
parents
or Use synonyms
teachers
to bring pleasant Use synonyms
behaviour
to Use synonyms
children
.
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Children
at a very young age especially between 2-4 years old are hard to control because during Use synonyms
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period it is when they start to walk, climb, run, throw, and certainly they can start to talk and demand things. Sometimes, they will throw a tantrum if they do not get what they want and Linking Words
this
is when Linking Words
parents
should teach them that Use synonyms
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is wrong and suggest what is Linking Words
right
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Children
, Use synonyms
however
, are not the same. They don't have the same attitude or personality. Some families need Linking Words
punishment
to teach their Use synonyms
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some don’t.
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Therefore
, a Linking Words
punishment
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such
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time-out
is practicable with early-age Use synonyms
children
. Use synonyms
Time-out
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punishment
is a type of Use synonyms
punishment
when Use synonyms
children
are taken away from where their misbehaviour happened. They will not allow to talk to anybody even their Use synonyms
parents
or Use synonyms
teachers
until the time is up. After that, it’s time for Use synonyms
parents
or Use synonyms
teachers
to tell them why they were in Use synonyms
time-out
. Use synonyms
This
method is widely used by many families and schools worldwide since it seems to be better than shouting or punishing them physically because Linking Words
such
methods, can give Linking Words
children
trauma which could possibly result in long-term consequences when they grow up and their bad Use synonyms
behaviour
can be hardwired. With the Use synonyms
time-out
method, Use synonyms
children
are unlikely to repeat the same mistake because they understand why they are being punished. And Use synonyms
children
will know automatically in the future that Use synonyms
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behaviour
is not the Use synonyms
right
thing to do.
In conclusion, it is necessary to punish Use synonyms
children
in order to teach them what is Use synonyms
right
or wrong. But Use synonyms
punishment
has to be done in the Use synonyms
right
way in order to give them good Use synonyms
behaviour
. Use synonyms
Thus
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punishment
can result in a negative way if Use synonyms
parents
or Use synonyms
teachers
use the wrong method.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite