*In the last 20years, there has been significant development in the field of information technology (IT), for example in World wide web and communication by email. However these development in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future.* *To wat extent do you agree with this view* *Give reasons for your answer and give any example from your own experience or knowledge*

In
this
essay, we want to talk about the effects of technology on our life in the future. In the question I think questions writer will say development in the field of information technology has been beneficial for all of them
while
in the next years may be harmful to using
however
I believe improved technology is not only bad for people but
also
is a good opportunity for developing world. On the one hand, if we decide to use a different type of IT,we can play with the Internet, learn new things and make plenty of apps.
Firstly
, if you become depressed, you will play for entertainment, you can use online games and you make happy.
Secondly
, when you try to learn new things but you can't learn them, I think if you watch the course online,it will be useful for you.
For example
, when I want to learn new things that I know it is difficult for me, I watch Coursera classes or Udemy classes till I learn them.
Thirdly
,scientists can make new programs for any problems.
For example
, they make various plenty of apps for learning new science, health, play, commenting, and other aims.
On the other hand
, if IT science improves we can achieve a lot of new science about our Earth and we can exist conditions for living in other plants.We can learn new skills, experiences and sciences
then
, we can build new stuff in the future.I think may be able to understand and make inventions for the problems that are hard to solve them. Elan Mask is a famous person in the field of IT. He researches about conditions of life on other planets. behind the house
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