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To what extent do you agree/disagree with the following statement? “A universal language should replace all the languages”

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In the modern era migration to any
country
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 has become very easy and flexible, and a few agree to have a global
language
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 for all.
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, I disagree with
this
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 to a large extent, as
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 me, it is more likely to affect us in a negative way. Yet, the prevalence of a common
language
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 can be a boon in certain situations.
This
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 paragraph will anticipate the dark side of introducing a universal
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.
Firstly
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, every
language
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 has originated from a particular culture and heritage.
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, a
country
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 is majorly known for its cultural identity.
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, a global
language
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 will wipe out not only a nation’s history
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 but
also
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 the tradition which different tribes of the nation follow even today. As an epitome, once West Indies sheltered 1748 tribes which gradually declined to 150 after the majority of the
people
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 started relying on the English
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-
also
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 a Universal
language
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.
Secondly
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, learning a completely new
language
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 may not turn out to be an easy task and
also
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 it will require several years to settle throughout the world.
Above all
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, it is just a risk which can threaten mankind in various ways more than it could help. The same can be corroborated by considering the example of my
country
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 India. The
country
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 prevails on the motto of “Unity in Diversity”. The diversity that India enjoys is furnished by the linguistic variety it follows. If a unanimous
language
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 were to be followed by India, the core motto of its worldwide recognition would be compromised. So, imposing a common
language
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 does not seem to be a great idea.
Furthermore
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, it will
also
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 question the capability of a person to learn a new
language
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; because it may happen that a person might fail to learn it completely and end up with no common medium to communicate, comprehend and correspond to. One good illustration to explain
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 is the ongoing struggle of some
people
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 to be able to deal with the English
language
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 which allegedly is the current Universal
language
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, as it has given fruitful results to only those capable individuals who managed to learn it properly.
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, it appears to be a challenge which might not be worthy enough to accept and give our precious time. Alternatively, despite the above disadvantages of
such
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 an implementation, one must not ignore the few positives that it could offer.
Due to
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 the diversity in the medium of speech the world over, it has always been tough for
people
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 to maintain a clear and smooth conversation with those who hail from different linguistic backgrounds.
Therefore
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, the decision to introduce a common
language
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 can overcome
such
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 barriers to communication.
To conclude
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, the inclusion of a universal
language
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 can be a boon to society, only if it is not made compulsory for
people
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 to follow.
Then
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,
instead
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 of helping, it will make things even worse for mankind.
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