It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that right way during raising the first child. One day, she was recommended parenting
parents
should participate in parenting education
courses to raise their children
. I agree with this
topic. In the following essay, I will discuss the reasons why I agree with examples.
First,
parents
can hear advice and experience about parenting from experts. To be specific, not only parents
could receive necessary
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the necessary
education
in parenting children
but also
parenting education
courses provide parents
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about parenting
children
. Such
education
enhances parent’s
parenting skills, and Fix the agreement mistake
parents’
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the relationship
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relationships
parents
and their children
are more
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positive
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a positive
For example
, my sister bought parenting books as her baby was born and studied on Youtube,but she felt lonely. As she participated in parenting education
courses, she could gain knowledge about parenting. As a result
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a positive
parents
.
Second,
parents
can relieve anxiety
about parenting. Parenting children
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parents
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and worry. In this
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such
anxiety
and grow confidence. From experience
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and worry about parenting. She could not be certain whether her parenting isAdd an article
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education
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parenting method and she could relieve Correct article usage
the right
anxiety
about parenting. Finally
, she was able to become healthy and happy growth with their children
.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement because parents
listen to expert’s experience
and advice and reduce worry about parenting.Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
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