Some countries pay extremely high salaries to people. Some people believe that the country must not do that and make a limit for the salaries. Do you agree or disagree?

Every
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deserve
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there
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their
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pay based on their
work
. Some people think that
salary
has to be
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for everyone and totally disagree with that statement.I will describe my own thought in that essay .
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high pay to higher position employ is very benefits. In recent years,every
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. Since they always try to give extra benefits to their
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.
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if you try to get
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own
employes
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happiness you need to give them
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of their based on their
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SO
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,they give them high pay based on their position.
Socoundly
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doesn’t
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have the
work
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didn’t have the same
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that
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. They do different
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different
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to pay.
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a lot of people think that
salary
has need a limit but if you don't think that maybe
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are not going to Inspire
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do their job.
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to
be give
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his best and he
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to do his
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perfectly but doesn't get any promotion and if he didn't get extra pay for his job maybe you will be disappointed
to
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this
job you never try to give his best for
this
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. To Conclusion, Reserve their own price so every
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higher
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to their employee based on their
work
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic inequality
  • civil unrest
  • motivation
  • productivity
  • brain drain
  • standard of living
  • societal well-being
  • tax revenues
  • public services
  • infrastructure
  • economic growth
  • consumer spending
  • meritocratic society
  • barrier to entry
  • diversity
  • innovation
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