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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates how water was used in different categories all over the world from 1900 to 2000
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 the table demonstrates the amount of water used in
Brazil
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 and
Congo
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 in 2000.
Overall
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, what stands out from the chart is that Agriculture always ranks first during the survey period. Another striking factor is all the lines experienced an upward trend.
In contrast
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, it is evident that
Brazil
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 has a population higher than
Congo
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. In 1900, Agriculture had the figure at 500 km3 and
then
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 it increased significantly until reached the peak at 3000 km3 in 2000. In terms of industrial use, it was almost 0 in 1900 but after 100 years, it saw a dramatic increase in the figure when it reached approximately 1500 km3 in 2000.
Furthermore
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, domestic use was the smallest over the period when its figure was nearly 0 in 1900 and 500 after an increase in 2000. One prominent of
this
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 data is that the population of
Brazil
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 was nearly 34 times higher than
Congo
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, 176 million and 5.2 million respectively.
Moreover
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, not only does the average of water-consuming per person in
Brazil
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 was higher than in
Congo
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 but
also
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 the irrigated land, (359 against 8 and 26500 against 100)

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Vocabulary: Replace the words brazil, congo with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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