A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

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Dear Bob, I`m writing to say how thankful I am that you`ve agreed to take care of my place and cat in my absence. Here is some additional info that you may need. First and most important, here is the number of my parents: 012345. In any emergency case don`t hesitate to call them. You

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reach me, but I am afraid I will be offline almost all the time. The cat usually responds to the name Luxor or any noise near his feeding place. Please, do not overfeed him because

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little devil may be super cute when he asks for treats.

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, I know that you are good with pets, so you can deal with it.

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, I wanted to remind you about the home security alarm. Please, do not forget to turn it off right after you come in or it will automatically call local cops. Actually, it is better for you to disable it completely. Thanks again, Daulet

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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7 paragraphs

165 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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