What are the most popular sport in your country ? What are the reason behind it's popularity ?

Among various well-known sports across the world,
football
is the most loved game in my country.It is a game of eleven players in a team where two teams play against each other.There are ample
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reasons behind
this
popularity,first of all,
football
can be played anywhere wherever there is a space.
However
,what is even better about
this
game is that can be played inside or outside which caused
football
playable
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any place.
Secondly
,playing
football
is easy it requires only a ball and two goalposts.It does not have any financial barriers you can even manage goalposts with sticks.
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,
football
is
quiet
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popular and the most energetic
sports
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all around the world.
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