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Many working people get little or no exercise during the work day, and have health problems as a result. -Why do so many people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem? -Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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 issue is very critical for jobholders because they do have not
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 for any activity or exercise in their daily heartache schedule.
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this
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 problem measures on the biggest level in past decades and so we
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 take serious action on
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 problem.
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 with, people are giving first preference of their
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 and career So they spend most of their
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 at
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, some individuals did not take good sleep and entire-primetime
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 in front of laptops and computers all night.
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, the working people did not manage their own
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 schedule for
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 or sporting.
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, massas are interested in that types of
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 and sporting but they have not paid for them.
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 these things are too expensive
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 as clothes and fees and all.
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, many people take over the stress of family responsibilities so
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 why they are doing double shifts or they are facing a lack of health problems.
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, Mr Akshay Kumar actor in the Bollywood industry in India, goes jogging in the early morning at 4 Am and he is physically and mentally fit
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, he is so busy person.
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, In many companies CEOs are too busy at
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time
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 they did not give
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 to their families and they did not follow any diet plans or do any exercise
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 or yoga.
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, many individuals are earning high salaries So they do not pay expenditures. For resolution government provide free facilities for health
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 as academics or sports
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 in every area and encouraged
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 through social media and advertisement platforms Because
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 is a very serious matter and detrimental to human health and inhabitants facing obesity, blood pressure and heart attack and many more. In conclusion, government provide free service for sports
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 and opens gym and academy or institutes at lesser fees for citizens and fitness exercise tutors on the social media platform, adds.
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