In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Our world

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by a variety of cultures. The argument that telling

children

with hard-working they can reach whatever they want has many pros and cons, in my personal opinion the benefits greatly outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand, many people think that encouraging

children

to endeavour may lead them to be successful and fulfilment in their future life. In other words, parents who motivated their

children

to fight against issues for massive goals may have a huge impact on their behaviour,

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motivation gives more power and self-confidence to the younger generation.

Consequently

, the

children

who have learned not to give up in the early stages have a higher chance of success in their own future careers because they know how to cope with difficult situations and deal with

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.

On the other hand

, the pitfalls of

this

approach should not be overlooked.

Furthermore

,

this

idea may have put enormous pressure on the

children

and relaxation is vital for their growth.

In addition

, they should learn failure is a part of the journey and it is not the opposite of success. From my perspective,

while

it is indispensable to motivate

children

to work hard and pursue their goals, it is

also

important to acknowledge that accomplishment is not solely determined by effort and not all of them have access to the same opportunities and resources. some may face,

therefore

, systemic barriers. In conclusion despite people having different views, I believe it would be better to have a work-life balance viewpoint to prevent all negative effects