You brought mobile phone from wallmart store recently it is no longer working properly write a letter to the manager

Dear Sir, The purpose of writing

this

letter is about the Mobile phone which I bought from your Newyork store on 31-May-2023. Let me provide you with detail, it's Sony Xperia 220 and the serial number is 1123423.

Although

this

is the latest model running in the current market now and I was very much excited about having it, in the

last

3 days there were some glitches have been noticed

while

using it. The camera of the mobile suddenly get blurred which decreased the picture quality, apart from that, it heated up very quickly and hung the screen which requires a reboot to function back.

Initially

, I thought it could be a firmware version issue, but after investing in the internet it seems like a hardware issue. During the

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deal I was told

this

phone would be under warranty for 6 months and since it's not working properly, I would request you to initiate the replacement process for

this

faulty item. Please elaborate on the process and provide me with a timeline as well to finish

this

replacement procedure. Your prompt help in

this

matter would be highly appreciated. Yours faithfully, Kamal Singh

Submitted by Leena Kapoor on Sat Jun 10 2023

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