The graph below presents the employment patterns in the usa between 1930 and 2010
The line graph displays the quota of
employment
in different sectors in America between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, out of the four sectors of employment
, farming, fishing and foresting was the highest employer at the beginning of the period but saw a consistent decline over the years , industrial and technical grew modestly , whiles sales
and office
and other services
fluctuated throughout the given period.
There was a steady decline in the rate
of recruitment in the Agriculture sector
with the highest employment
rate
recorded in 1930 of almost 80 people
and dropped over the 80years period till it recorded the lowest employment
rate
in 2010 nearly 0.
The technical sector
began employing in 1930 with about 5 staff and rose steadily till they recorded their highest recruitment in 2010 of about 30 people
. The industrial sector
on the other hand
was actively employed in the year 1940 with nearly 0 employees but rose consistently till they recorded their highest number of employees in 2010 of about 30 people
as well.
Sales
and offices with other services
fluctuated in their recruitment rate
throughout the years. With the sales
and office
sector
attaining their lowest enrollment rate
in 1940 of nearly 0 personnel, other services
recorded their highest hiring of almost 20 people
in the same year. In 2010, the sales
and office
sector
recorded its highest employment
rate
of about 20 people
whilst other services
employed nearly half of the number employed by the sales
and office
sector
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