The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
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The given maps give information about a manufacturable zone in the centre of Norbiton
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and a new scheme for its redevelopment in the future.
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, it can be seen that the industrial zone will be completely changed to a
residental
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residential
area with several homes
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of factories. Another striking point
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there would be more facilities available. Looking at the details, a school is about to construct on the
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side
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a
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on the
north east
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and
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a medical centre just on the southwest of the intersection and several shops will
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build
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the south-West. Followingly, a bridge is about to construct over the river where people can reach their homes on the north side;
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, a small round is about to be built on the south. Several houses will be constructed around the
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intersection. Another striking point is that there will not be any factory in Norbitcon anymore in the new plan and a part of the farmland will make a way for housing port.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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