Technological developments leads to lots of environmental issues. Some people think a simple life style can preserve the environment. While others argue technology itself can solve it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Modern society is driven by

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technologies are helping to ease

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, it has several adverse effects which include environmental issues. Some people say that technological development is a key factor which is threatening to the environment and

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simple lifestyle can make them sustainable.

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, a large number of people argue that

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-related hazards can be overcome by new inventions. In

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essay, I shall discuss both of these views and

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summarize my view on the aforementioned matter.

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with , how ordinary lifestyle gives an advantage to the environment .The use of natural resources for our daily

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requirements leads to maintaining a green ecosystem.

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, if we avoid

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material with natural materials can avoid

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pollution on the earth and

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can save the lives of animals , plants and soils.

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natural resources are limited for the current huge population.

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simple

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protects the environment it looks practically unviable.

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, some people strongly urge that

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itself can offer a solution for the threat created by them. The basis of

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argument is that they believe we can develop the process of recycling and utilising effectively the waste material.

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can

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back to raw material or

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, the waste products can be converted to biogas and can be used for transportation fuel and cooking fuel.

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, there is always a solution to a problem and

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approach can complete the happy

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of humans. In my opinion, it is difficult to survive without

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. But , moving forward we need to look for developing sustainable technologies using green resources and less environmental impact processes.

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and environmental protection go on with shoulder-to-shoulder priority

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so that we can meet the need and secureness together.

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task response

The essay addresses the topic by discussing both views and presenting the author's opinion. More detail and depth in both perspectives would improve the task response score.

coherence cohesion

The introduction and conclusion are present and effective in framing the essay. The logical structure and clear presentation of ideas throughout the essay are well maintained.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

313 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

technological advancements
environmental damage
sustainable living practices
carbon footprint
renewable energy sources
electric vehicles
recycling and waste management
energy efficiency
eco-friendly alternatives
immediate environmental benefits
long-term sustainability
integrating both approaches

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