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You have just moved into a new flat. Write a letter to your friend telling them tthat you have moved. In your letter: - describe the reason why you moved - describe the new flat - invite him or her to your new flat

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Dear Alisha, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you in regard to the fact that I moved into a new flat in Love Street. First of all, the building in which I lived previously was quite noisy.
Therefore
, I was not sleeping well and missed my exams. I
also
 decided to move to another building. I would like to state that I wanted to share it with you. I have moved into a cute and big apartment.
Moreover
, it has a view of the National Park. I look forward to you seeing it; you will love its kitchen and cinema room.
However
, I couldn't choose a plant for the balcony, so I ask for your help in
this
 matter. I invite you to my flat for a new film,which you want to watch, next Sunday. I am sure that we will have an enjoyable time together.
Also
, there will be different ways to entertain ourselves. See you soon, Wish regard, Sinan
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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