You have just moved into a new flat. Write a letter to your friend telling them tthat you have moved. In your letter: - describe the reason why you moved - describe the new flat - invite him or her to your new flat

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Dear Alisha, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you in regard to the fact that I moved into a new flat in Love Street. First of all, the building in which I lived previously was quite noisy.

Therefore

, I was not sleeping well and missed my exams. I

also

decided to move to another building. I would like to state that I wanted to share it with you. I have moved into a cute and big apartment.

Moreover

, it has a view of the National Park. I look forward to you seeing it; you will love its kitchen and cinema room.

However

, I couldn't choose a plant for the balcony, so I ask for your help in

this

matter. I invite you to my flat for a new film,which you want to watch, next Sunday. I am sure that we will have an enjoyable time together.

Also

, there will be different ways to entertain ourselves. See you soon, Wish regard, Sinan

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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You have just moved into a new flat. Write a letter to your friend telling them tthat you have moved. In your letter: - describe the reason why you moved - describe the new flat - invite him or her to your new flat

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others say that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that family life and parents have great influences on children’s development. Do you agree or disagree?

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Test date 1/12/2018 Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.