It is certainly true that the percentage of senior
people
has increased. In my opinion, the
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merits of increasing
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of senior
people
outweigh the demerits.
On the one hand,
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are
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increasing of
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of elderly individuals.
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problem ,
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people
can
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pressure on natural resources
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water, food,
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population ,means more traffic congestion as well Co2 emissions, which will
increase
the climate change and climate change.
Secondly
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people
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help to support from
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the
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people
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and
also
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to
the public
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to the
governments
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vital services, healthcare,
educationCorrect word choice
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.
On the other hand
, I would like to argue that
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of
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the
of elderly
people
drawbacksCorrect article usage
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. To
with, the most of high position jobs in
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companies and
governments
facilities
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by
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older
people
.
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companies
such
as
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Amazon,
AppleCorrect word choice
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running by
people
over 65 years.
This
is because they have a lot of experience and skills to deal with challenges and responsibilities, which
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the companies to make
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amount of profits. As a
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, elderly
people
contribute to prosper the economy of countries.
Secondly
,
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number
of older
people
, means more workforce
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to engage in
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market.
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governments
can
increase
the age of retirement and encourage senior
people
to work.
Therefore
, the
number
of taxes the
governments
can earn through
people
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, and the authorities can use
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funds to improve the crucial infrastructure, healthcare, education,
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transport.
To sum up
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perspective, the upsides of
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number
of elderly
people
outweigh than downsides.