The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in 2016.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in 2016.
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This
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provided pie chart illustrates the money which was collected and spent by a charity for children in the USA in one year. It is obvious that the total earnings slightly exceeded all expenses.
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, the first chart was divided into six figures
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the second one was composed of three categories. At the outset, donated food accounted for most of the fund, at 86.6%, but the program services represented the majority of expenditures, at 95.8%.
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to that, the second largest
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for the charity was community contributions, at 10.4%, and it was around eight times less than the first
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source.
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, the other sources of revenue were a minority compared to donated food, which was program revenue, investment
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, investment grants, and other
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, at 3% combined.
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, the other expenditures were very small in comparison to program services,
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as fundraising, management and general which accounted for 4.2% combined. Though all the charity’s expenses, at 53244896 were high, the total revenue sources were at 53561580 and covered them.
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