You recently notice a local restaurant offering a part time job Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter •Explain that you would like to apply for this job •Give some details of relevant experience that you have •specify the date and time that would suit for you You should write at least 150 words You don’t write any address
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in your hiring employee post which was updated on the local community website last
weekend.
The reason why I would like to work
at your Korean restaurant
is that the chef's assistant position is suitable for me. This
is because I want to become a chef in the future and I always try to cook by myself at home. I am very keen on learning cooking and I am not reluctant to learn new things. Also
, it is very helpful for me if I work
at your restaurant
.
Moreover
, I have a lot of work
experience at various kinds of restaurants. I can give some details information about my skills briefly. I used to work
at a Korean restaurant
as a chef's assistant for 2 years so I know how to cook and some recipes. I worked at a Kimchi soup restaurant
in the same position for a year as well.
You asked me what time and date is available for me. I can work
from Friday to Sunday anytime and I cannot work
on other days because of my college course.
I am ready to work
so please let me know if you need more information about me.
I am looking forward to hearing good news from you.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Hwiju Jin.Submitted by gnlwnww on
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coherence cohesion
For coherence, try to use a wider variety of connecting words and make sure each paragraph seamlessly flows into the next. Using phrases such as 'In addition to this,', 'Furthermore,', and 'Moreover,' can enhance the connection between your ideas.
coherence cohesion
For cohesion, ensure that your paragraphs are well-organized and each one deals with a single idea. This strategy is already well used in your letter, but refining it with clearer topic sentences can enhance understanding.
task achievement
To improve task achievement, ensure every aspect of the question is addressed comprehensively. Your letter covers the task requirements effectively but adding more specific details about your qualifications and how they would benefit the restaurant could strengthen your position.
task achievement
Ensure the writing tone is suitable for the context. Your tone is generally appropriate; however, adopting a slightly more formal tone could make your letter more professional. Try to avoid slang and overly casual language.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.