The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
The chart above depicts the trend in wheat exports in three different regions in the
year
1985 to 1990.
According to
the data provided, it is evident that each area shows a different number of wheat exported to other countries. In 1985, Australia exported 15
million
tons
and
then
increased to 16
million
tons
in 1986. In the next
year
,
this
figure decreased gradually and with only 11
million
tons
in 1989 and 1990. Meanwhile, Canada’s export stood at 19
million
tons
in 1985 but went down to 12
million
tons
in the next
year
.
This
amount increased significantly in the next two years and reach its peak in 1988 at 25
million
tons
, but decreased considerably in 1989 with only 14
tons
.
At the end
of the period,
this
figure went up to 19
million
tons
. European Community’s export started at 16
million
tons
in 1985
,
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but went down to 14
million
tons
in the next
year
.
After
this
period, the number increased slightly in 1987 and remained steady in the following
year
, and increased dramatically in the next two years and accounted for 21
million
tons
in 1990 and constituting the highest record during the period.
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