The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
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The chart above depicts the trend in wheat exports in three different regions in the
year
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1985 to 1990.
According to
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the data provided, it is evident that each area shows a different number of wheat exported to other countries. In 1985, Australia exported 15
million
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tons
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and
then
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increased to 16
million
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tons
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in 1986. In the next
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,
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figure decreased gradually and with only 11
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tons
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in 1989 and 1990. Meanwhile, Canada’s export stood at 19
million
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tons
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in 1985 but went down to 12
million
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tons
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in the next
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.
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amount increased significantly in the next two years and reach its peak in 1988 at 25
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tons
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, but decreased considerably in 1989 with only 14
tons
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.
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of the period,
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figure went up to 19
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tons
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. European Community’s export started at 16
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tons
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in 1985
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but went down to 14
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tons
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in the next
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.
After
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this
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period, the number increased slightly in 1987 and remained steady in the following
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, and increased dramatically in the next two years and accounted for 21
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tons
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in 1990 and constituting the highest record during the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, million, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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