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Many people try to achieve a work-life balance but fail. Why is this happening? What can be done to help people overcome this problem?

#people #work-life #balance
The past and forecasted data
of
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 energy
consumption
 in the U.S. is depicted on the graph for each type of fuel.
Petrol
 and
oil
 account for the lion's share of all utilized resources,
while
 the utilization
rates
 for
such
fuels
 as nuclear, solar, wind, and hydropower are below 10 quadrillion units both in the past and predicted future.
Moreover
, coal and natural gas
consumption
rates
 are sandwiched between the
consumption
rates
 of fossil and artificial
fuels
.
Additionally
,
petrol
,
oil
, and coal
consumption
 has been gradually increasing and will show an upward trend in the future.
Although
the
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natural gas utilization has
also
 been growing, it is predicted to flatten out.
In contrast
, the
consumption
rates
 for other resources fluctuated with no clear-cut trend.
Overall
,
the
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petrol
 and
oil
 utilization is the highest among all types
fuels
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, and an upward
dynamics
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 is evident in
petrol
,
oil
, and coal,
while
 the
consumption
rates
 for other
fuels
 are predicted to reach a plateau.
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