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Search Results Some people prefer to live in hot climates whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer

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Lifestyle has been an interesting topic recently. Some
people
 like to settle in areas with hot weather
while
 others prefer cold ones. In my opinion, I prefer to live in a tropical
country
. Westerners have been interested in retiring in a
country
 with a hot climate for centuries. In a recent study, the migration of Westerners from their home
country
 to tropical
countries
 has doubled. There are various reasons for
this
.
Firstly
, in a tropical
country
, you do not need to have or purchase bulk clothes. Rather, just having a few T-shirts and shorts is enough.
For instance
, in the Philippines,
people
 seldom use pants, jackets, or long-sleeved shirts as it is not weather appropriate. They would usually just use singlets and shorts.
Secondly
, beaches are widely known in most tropical areas. Tourists are attracted to move to these places
due to
 the white sand beaches. In Bali,
for example
, there are various white sand beaches that tourists visit as they do not have them back in their motherland.
However
, there are
also
people
 who prefer to live in cold
countries
. Asians are known to migrate to
countries
 that have a winter season.
This
 is because they haven't experienced winter ever in their life. Filipinos are one of the
people
 who are eager to migrate to cold climate
countries
 as they want to escape the excessive heat in the Philippines and
also
 they want to witness personally the snowfall. To summarize, everyone has their own preferences when it comes to living in a warm or cool nation. It is up to us to decide which places we are happy and comfortable to live in. As for me, I prefer to live in a warm climate as I love just wearing singlets and shorts and
also
 I love going to the beach as it takes away my stress from work.
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