You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, •explain what you like about the cafeteria •say what is wrong with it •suggest how it could be improved

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regard to the
cafeteria
,which is located at Gaziantep College. I am Sinan, and I have been studying at Gaziantep College for the
last
two years. I usually have lunch at the college
cafeteria
. I would like to express that it has a variety of foods, and these foods are quite delicious.
Moreover
, all your staff are incredibly gracious, and they clean the tables fastly every time.
Therefore
, I admire
this
cafeteria
and like to spend time with my friends there.
However
, there is a problem at the
cafeteria
; the ventilation is really inadequate. Its air is awful
due to
the fact that all of the foods' smells are mixed. I will be glad if you renew the ventilation systems.
Thus
, it will be a apply lovely place. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Sinan Y
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