You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, •explain what you like about the cafeteria •say what is wrong with it •suggest how it could be improved

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regard to the

cafeteria

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,which is located at Gaziantep College. I am Sinan, and I have been studying at Gaziantep College for the

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two years. I usually have lunch at the college

cafeteria

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. I would like to express that it has a variety of foods, and these foods are quite delicious.

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, all your staff are incredibly gracious, and they clean the tables fastly every time.

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, I admire

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cafeteria

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and like to spend time with my friends there.

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, there is a problem at the

cafeteria

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; the ventilation is really inadequate. Its air is awful

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the fact that all of the foods' smells are mixed. I will be glad if you renew the ventilation systems.

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, it will be a apply lovely place. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Sinan Y

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

150 words

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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, •explain what you like about the cafeteria •say what is wrong with it •suggest how it could be improved

Scientists predict in the near future, car will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many of today’s urgent problems can only be solved by international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems such as railways and trams. to what extant do you agree or disagree

Some people think the best way to learn new things is to study them alone. Others think that it is always better to get help from a skilled teacher. Discuss both views and give your opinion