In some countries an increasing number of people are sufferimg from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree pr disagree with this opinion?

In

this

fast modern life, there is no doubt that our lifestyle affects our lives directly, and one of the most things that affect our lives is fast

food

. Some people opine that government has the responsibility to reduce

this

phenanomane by

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a higher tax on

this

kind of

food

,

while

others opine the contrary. In my

opinion

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I stand with the first concept that believes in the necessity of

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this

problem because it

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causes

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cases

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causes

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many health problems, and I will elaborate on

this

in

this

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following

phragraphs

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,

To begin

with, with

this

fast busy life most

of

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people

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the people

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now tend to have

junk

food

, because they do not have time to cock healthy

food

to themselves,

therefore

they find it easier to eat

junk

food

,

however

,

this

kind of

food

contain

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a lot of low

qouality

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quality

of

food

, and it affects our health directly, which cause a lot of disease like high pressure and

dipaties

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disparities

deputies

.

On the other hand

, people will not stop doing

this

and eat

junk

food

unless there is a high task on

this

kind of

food

,

that is

why it is the government's responsibility to set a higher tax on

junk

food

. In

this

case

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when anyone wants to eat

junk

food

they will think many times before they decide to have a meal, in

this

case

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we

garate

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guarantee

that

the

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junk

food

consumption will reduce

at

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least 50% because not everyone will afford the price of it.

To sum up

,

junk

food

is the main reason for many diseases,

therefore

the government have to have

a

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plan to stop

this

phenonmen

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phenomenon

phenomena

.