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some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time spent on laerning facts and not enugh on learning practical skills. do you agree or disagree?

#people #levels #education #schools #universities #time #facts #enugh #skills
In the past,many educational institutes did not learn about any practical skills;Thise dayes number of institutes provide several courses about many practical skills . I disagree with
this
 statement and I shall provide some important reasons which would help to support my opinion. There are many reasons why, I disagree with
this
 phenomenon.
To begin
 with, practical skills are necessary in all academic authorities of the whole world.
Therefore
, these conditions will create better opportunities for learners.In that case, a significant number of institutes provide these methods for their students, who are studying here.
For example
 : India has been making many practical
institute
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two decades ago.
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