The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.
The provided line graph illustrates the
number
of sportsmen who joined the Olympics, while
the bar graph gives information about the number
of participants
in terms of gender in the 88-year period
, between 1924 and 2012.
Overall
, the number
of participants
represented an upward trend throughout the period
, while
the number
of women increased significantly at the end
of the period
.
Looking at the details, as regards the number
of males, there was an upward trend in the whole period
. It stood at 3000 members of the Olympics in 1924 and rose steadily until reaching just under 6000, which made up the biggest number
of members, at the end
of the period
. In terms of attendees of females, there was the same trend with male counterparts. Between 1984 and 2012, although
their number
saw a dramatic increase from just over 1000 to just under 5000, the number
of females was never able to exceed male participant
Now turning to the total number
of participants
in the games, both charts clearly depicted that the number
of participants
went up the whole period
. It was between 2000 and 4000 participants
in 1924 and increased gradually until reaching over 6000 in 1984. In the following years, it rose sharply and overtook 10000 until reaching more than 10000 in 2012.Submitted by haturk10 on
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