The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
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The given table presents data about how the money was spent on the police
budget
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in
one
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area of Britain between 2017 and 2018 and pie charts illustrate how it was distributed.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the major part of the
budget
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was spent on officers and staff salaries and the National Government is top of the list of police budgets in both two years. Looking at details, the table shows three sections of the police
budget
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. The first
one
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is the National Government with 175.5 million in 2017 and 177.8
m
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in 2018 with a steady increase in the head of the list and the second
one
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is Local Taxes with 91.2
m
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and 102.3
m
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in 2017 and 2018
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the
last
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one
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is about Other parts with 38
m
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in 2017 and 38.5
m
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in 2018. If we look at the pie charts, a big part of the money was spent on salaries with 75% in 2017 but we can see decreasing to 69% in 2018 and
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17% of
this
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budget
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was spent on Building and Transport
this
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percentage is steady in both years and
finally
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Technology
budget
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shows a significant increase in 2018 with 7% higher than past year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, one, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • government policies
  • economic conditions
  • community services
  • crime prevention
  • public safety
  • significant increase/decrease
  • distribution
  • assessment
  • reflection
  • allocation shifts
  • budget comparison
  • impact analysis
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