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Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced Is it positive or negative trend?

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Products
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 are brought from other
countries
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 to supermarkets. It might be a cause for the development of
countries
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...😕 One of the drawbacks of
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 trend is the disappearance of social connections with other
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. Because of exchange
goods
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 is means of interstate cohesion. If the population continues using the
products
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 of only their
countries
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,
this
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country
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 may be faced with financial poverty.
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 is because they can not catch up and provide residents with eatables and other
goods
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 , meaning that there are not enough companies which can accommodate
products
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 in many undeveloped
countries
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. So the disappearance of imports might bring plenty of difficulties to our life....😕
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 to ,say using
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are
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produced in other
countries
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 can improve our life. The
products
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 of foreign
countries
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 are more healthily than ours. Purchasing of more and more
countries
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 from
goods
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 of Germany could be a good example here. If we use
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 from other developed
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such
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 as the UK, Coreya or China, our
country
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 will include extra additions to production in order to increase the quality of
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.
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,
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 our
country
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 can export
products
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, which can lead to taking more income.....😕 Taking everything into consideration we should say that importing from other
countries
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 can bring us many facilities for developing our
country
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