The chart below shows the total number of journeys per year for a European city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of journeys per year for a European city.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the evolution of the annual amount of travel divided into two categories, by private vehicle or public transport from a European city from 1940 to 2040.
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, the total of journeys by public transport will have a significant increase by 2040,
while
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the use of own automobile will decrease considerably. On the one hand, the total amount of travel people by their own car was 600,000 in 1940 when it started to grow significantly reaching a peak in the 1970s decade with 1,000,000.00 travel per year. After that, it decreased until reached its lowest value in the 2000s with 400,000 annual trips. Apart from a brief rise from the 2000s to the mid-2020s, it declined gradually and will continue
this
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trend until 2040.
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, in 1940 the annual total journeys by public transport were 500,000,
this
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quantity remained steady until the 1960s. After that, it started to oscillate until the mid-1980s when had a sharp rise until it overtook automobile drives
at the end
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of the 1980s. After an abrupt fall between the mid-1990s and mid-2000s, it had been growing and will remain with
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tendency by 2040.
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