The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
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The chart illustrates the amount of time spend
the
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beach
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, reading books and visiting places
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on holiday in Greece in August 2019 by people from China, America, Turkey and
Brazil
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.
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, reading books had the highest amount of time among Chinese
visitors
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while
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travellers from
Brazil
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preferred to spend more
hours
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at the
beach
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and the holiday activities had the least number of
hours
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spent visiting places. The
visitors
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from China spend 8
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reading books as compared to American sightseers who spend only 5
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. The tourist from Turkey and
Brazil
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spent an equal amount of 4
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reading a book. People from
Brazil
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enjoyed spending 6
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at the
beach
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activity
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Turkish people spent 5
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. American and Chinese tourists spent 4
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and 3
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at the
beach
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respectively. As for visiting places, all
visitors
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from America, China, Turkey and
Brazil
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spend fewer
hours
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doing leisure activities. Both American and Turkish tourists spent 3
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. Brazilian
visitors
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only used 2
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and Chinese just 1 hour on
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activity.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words beach, brazil, visitors, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number
  • leisure activities
  • tourists
  • nationalities
  • cultural trends
  • interests
  • vacation
  • influence
  • participation
  • impact
  • weather
  • events
  • festivals
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