The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The chart illustrates the amount of time spend
the
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on the
beach
, reading books and visiting places while
on holiday in Greece in August 2019 by people from China, America, Turkey and Brazil
.
Overall
, reading books had the highest amount of time among Chinese visitors
while
travellers from Brazil
preferred to spend more hours
at the beach
and the holiday activities had the least number of hours
spent visiting places.
The visitors
from China spend 8 hours
reading books as compared to American sightseers who spend only 5 hours
. The tourist from Turkey and Brazil
spent an equal amount of 4 hours
reading a book. People from Brazil
enjoyed spending 6 hours
at the beach
activity whereas
Turkish people spent 5 hours
. American and Chinese tourists spent 4 hours
and 3 hours
at the beach
respectively.
As for visiting places, all visitors
from America, China, Turkey and Brazil
spend fewer hours
doing leisure activities. Both American and Turkish tourists spent 3 hours
. Brazilian visitors
only used 2 hours
and Chinese just 1 hour on this
activity.Submitted by Gaone.mokomane on
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