you recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. write a letter to the company to explain what you ordered and what is missing, explain the importance of missing item, ask for replacement item.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to you regarding the missing shipment of my online purchase.Recently I see there was a 30% discount on each purchase,so I planned to order a watch from your well-eminent Daniel Wellington official website.

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, when the delivery came the item that has been ordered was not in there, it was missing.

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week Friday my younger sister visited my house for our family get-together party, during the party her wristwatch was broken which is the very authentic one she ever had and

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the buckle not working properly.I do observe that the wristwatch was very old and unable to use anymore. Eventually, I got your advertisement on my phone that a promotional price is going on.I decided to present a wristwatch for her birthday which is on April 2nd, to make her surprise and make the day indelible. I was really keen to receive your commission when it has been delivered to me but the moment opens the box the watch was missing.

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I contact your online customer care service regarding the missing of my package, they said our system shows that the item has been delivered and instructed me to write a complaint letter officially to you to proceed with

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action to request to replace my purchase as well. I hope the given letter will find you and request you to do the necessary action to deliver my package with high priority as soon as possible. Sincerely, Nat.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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